History 4069 M. Ladd-Taylor
mltaylor@yorku.ca
STYLE GUIDE
Writing is communication, and the first step to writing a good
paper is to organize your thoughts. The introduction is the most
important part of the paper, since that is where you introduce your
thesis and first engage the reader. You should also think carefully
about the structure of the entire paper, and present your main points
in a logical sequence (eg, in chronological order or following the
structure of your primary source). Most history papers also follow
certain conventions, which are listed below:
FOLLOW A LOGICAL STRUCTURE:
- State your argument (thesis) early in the paper, probably in
the first or second paragraph.
- Organize your paragraphs so that each paragraphs is built around
one major idea
- Use topic sentences to state the paragraph's main idea and
move your overall argument forward.
- Use the first and/or last sentence(s) of paragraphs for transitions.
Good transition sentences are like a road map: they tell your
readers where they have been and where they're heading now.
- The conclusion should not simply summarize what you have already
said, but clarify its significance. Avoid introducing new ideas
or information in the conclusion.
WRITE CLEARLY AND WELL
- Use precise language: avoid generalizations and, where necessary,
define your terms.
- Use tenses correctly, eg: Harriet Jacobs describes her escape
from slavery, but Jacobs escaped from slavery.
- Use gender-neutral language (plurals come in handy here!).
- Use modern terms (eg African American, not Negro), even if
your sources do not -- or explain your decision to use older,
possibly offensive terms (eg, feebleminded) in a footnote or endnote.
- Write in the active voice: "The professor assigned a paper,”
not "A paper was assigned by the professor."
- Avoid run-on sentences. Overly long sentences can usually be
split into two or more sentences.
- Avoid dangling clauses. Make sure that a subordinate clause
refers to the word or words immediately preceding or following
them. For example, write: “Students taking this course,
which meets on Wednesdays, can write well,” instead of “This
course’s students, which meets on Wednesdays, can write
well.”
USE QUOTATIONS WISELY
- Quotations should contain the exact words found in the original.
- Quotations should be used sparingly; for the most part, they
should illustrate your point, not make it for you.
- Quotations of fewer than four lines should remain in the text
and be enclosed in quotation marks. “The quotation marks
come after the period.”
- Quotations of four lines or more should be set off from the
main text and indented.
- All quotations should be properly cited.
FOLLOW A CONSISTENT METHOD OF CITATION
Historians usually use endnotes or footnotes following the Chicago
Manual of Style. Most of the assigned reading for the course follows
this style, and you can use their notes as a guide. In general,
notes should come at the end of a sentence or paragraph, even if
the quotation is in the middle of a sentence.
The first time you refer to a book, list the full bibliographical
information (including the author’s first name. Subsequent
references need only the author’s name or a shortened version
of the title.
Please view the word document
for examples.
For subsequent references to the same source, use “Ibid.”
if the source was cited in the previous note. Otherwise, use the
author’s surname or a shortened version of the title, eg.
Ladd-Taylor, 5-6 OR "NSC 68.”
|